Earthquake
May 25, 2015 22:18
Today, an earthquake occurred around noon.
It was measured level two on the Japanese intensity scale.
In our laboratory, some said "it's shaking" or "oh, earthquake?" but most of us didn't mind it.
We are accustomed to such a little tremors.
However, I think we can move quickly and appropriately to big tremors, because we have trained for earthquakes since we were in elementary school.
It was measured level two on the Japanese intensity scale.
In our laboratory, some said "it's shaking" or "oh, earthquake?" but most of us didn't mind it.
We are accustomed to such a little tremors.
However, I think we can move quickly and appropriately to big tremors, because we have trained for earthquakes since we were in elementary school.
No. 1 Emmeline's correction
- It was measured level two on the Japanese intensity scale.
- It measured level two on the Japanese intensity scale.
- We are accustomed to such a little tremors.
- We are accustomed to small tremors.
- However, I think we can move quickly and appropriately to big tremors, because we have trained for earthquakes since we were in elementary school.
- However, I think we can react quickly and appropriately to big tremors, because we have been trained for earthquakes since we were in elementary school.
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Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2 Shannon's correction
- Today, an earthquake occurred around noon.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- In our laboratory, some said "it's shaking" or "oh, earthquake?" but most of us didn't mind it.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- We are accustomed to such a little tremors.
- We are accustomed to such a little tremors.